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This was like tripping on something without taking anything.
Definitely an interesting experience.

That was great! It's always nice to see a longer game on NG, games like yours show the true artistic potential of the website!
Special compliments to whomever put together the music. It's killer.

Keep up the good work!

Gerkinman responds:

Thank you very much! The music was actually by my cousin, I think he did a pretty fantastic job as well!

Damn! Nicely made game!
The fact that you took the extra time to go past simply making a simple collect game and added in upgrades and a cool back-story is great!

Keep up the great work!

BonelessSTD responds:

Thanks a lot, and we are glad you enjoyed the story...

It's clear that you put some level of effort in this. I used to make dress up games quite a bit back in the day, people generally don't play them and they're generally not worth the effort.
However if you are going to stick with it I would recommend working a lot on the art. As you previously mentioned you are using a mouse to draw this. It's fairly difficult drawing with a mouse but if you were to sketch something out first, take a picture of it and then trace it over in flash you might come up with a better product. Some planning on the art side and simple proportions might be a good idea, the characters arms are clearly half the length of her legs. If you find a body part which you are having problems with you should try to hide it, I see you did this with the hands but you left the feet out in the open, next time if you can't draw them pop on some shoes so the player doesn't have to notice.
Sorry for the wall of text, just trying to be helpful.
Good luck!

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